I went to the writing center sort of early in the first quarter so I don't exactly remember what I was told. I also didn't write down when I went - I'm really bad about stuff like that - I'm also pretty bad with names in the first place and I forgot who helped me with my paper, which is embarrassing.
I think what that person told was helpful because I got a good grade on that paper. It also made sense. I think I was using "it" in my paper a little to much and didn't have much variation in my sentence structure.
I read Skulduggery Pleasant by Derek Landy I finished it 3 hours