Monday, February 17, 2014

My Poem

The Family and The Apple Trees
By Alex Daverede




The cellar door swung freely on freshly oiled hinges


It's shadow swinging and shifting in the breeze


While the apple trees stand tall in the field


A car grinds to a halt on the harsh gravel way


Its engine sputtering and rust screeching


The apple trees soon find themselves under attack from small hands


Reaching up for filling fresh fruit grabbing at branches


The red apples like beacons through the foliage falling from the assault


They sit with there bounty in there wreckage under the shade eating there fill


While the father shuts the cellar door gently relishing the breeze blowing through the field


Knowing all is well here under the clear blue sky with his family


The youngest child shyly offers her father an apple


The ripest she found, he accepts the apple and pats her head


The mother walks in the tiny home and starts to tidy up


The children run and play while the parents cook and clean


They try to climb the apple tree to search for more treasure to share


Seeing no ruby red only emerald green they admit defeat


And seeing the sun sinking slowly trudge toward there home

techniques: Euphony, Cacophony, Sibilance, Onomatopoeia

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