By Alex Daverede
The cellar door
swung freely on freshly oiled hinges
It's shadow swinging
and shifting in the breeze
While the apple
trees stand tall in the field
A car grinds to a
halt on the harsh gravel way
Its engine
sputtering and rust screeching
The apple trees soon
find themselves under attack from small hands
Reaching up for
filling fresh fruit grabbing at branches
The red apples like
beacons through the foliage falling from the assault
They sit with there
bounty in there wreckage under the shade eating there fill
While the father
shuts the cellar door gently relishing the breeze blowing through the field
Knowing all is well
here under the clear blue sky with his family
The youngest child
shyly offers her father an apple
The ripest she
found, he accepts the apple and pats her head
The mother walks in
the tiny home and starts to tidy up
The children run and
play while the parents cook and clean
They try to climb
the apple tree to search for more treasure to share
Seeing no ruby red
only emerald green they admit defeat
And seeing the sun
sinking slowly trudge toward there home
techniques: Euphony, Cacophony, Sibilance, Onomatopoeia
Wow, Alex, I really enjoyed this poem!
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