Research Draft

I think my draft is okay. I was worried it wouldn't be long enough at first because I had about two pages done; then I checked the formatting we needed to have it in and the spacing between to lines made it a lot longer and now I'm a little worried it could be to long or I will have to be more general or something. I might need to change a few things to make it flow more because now the transitions aren't very good. I had a lot of information that's easy to work with but putting it together and paraphrasing it is kind of hard. It was sort of fun writing and having all these details to write with; kind of like writing a story or compiling everything. I would like you to focus on how well my paper flows and maybe the order of things.